A very dramatic landscape that makes you wish that you could have been there, but I feel that the viewpoint chosen makes for a very messy image.
I think that you should have tried to isolate parts of this image to make a simpler image.

Derek Doar

I agree with Derek. I find the right hand side of the image with the lake and towering mountains by far the most interesting part of the image. Try a squarish crop of this and see what you think.

Bob Rowe